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Things were going pretty well between the both of you so you decided to make
your relationship with Gilbert offical. The two of you had gone out for a full
year and today, you and Gilbert decided to hang out at his house... well
his little brother's house for the weekend. However, when you got there, you
were a bit surprised where his room was...

"Is this... a basement!? You're kidding me right?"

"Not at all Frau... Luddy kicks me in her most of the time. Only
vhen I actually behave myself do I get to sleep upstairs. I
just get thrown in here so often that I decided to kind of
move in Kesesesese~!!!"

"I don't see how that's funny" you sighed.

You had packed three days worth of clothes in your suitecase which you placed
near Gilberts bed. The time was around tweleve at night and the Narcissis had
his room actually cleaned. When you both were little, the first time you went into
his room was a nightmare... But you guessed people could actually change if they
wanted to.

"Um, I'm going to use the bathroom, okay", you said as you took off your shoes.

"Okay. Don't take too long Frau. You vouldn't vant me thinking that you're
touching yourself to the thought of ze awesome me", he smirked.

You pushed him playfully and went up the stairs saying
"Idiot! Like I would do that!"

As you used the bathroom appliences, you couldn't help but think about what
that Prussian could be doing right now.... It was quite terrifying. You
finished up as quickly as you could and went downstairs as qickly as possible.
That's when you saw Gilbert holding something black.... wait....


Gilbert stopped right in his tracks and smirked.
"Nice undervear Frau... I didn't think you would have any plans on tempting me~!"

"HA! Nice try! Like I would ever do something like that...", you blushed.

"You don't sound very convincing. Then if you don't plan on tempting me,
I vant you to vear these... Just these..."

"N-NO! Are you crazy! I'm a lady you know! I wouldn't do--"

Gilbert's lips soon pressed against yours very sweetly and gentle. You faced him
with an even bigger blush and smiled with a sigh. "I'll do it..."


"Only if you promise not to touch me."


"Gilbert....", you said impatiently.

"Fine Frau", he groaned...

"So stubborn. You know you can't get EVERYTHING you want", you laughed
as you headed to the bathroom to change. Ludwig was already asleep so
you were able to sneak back downstairs wearing your back lace panties and
bra. You fixed your hair and put lotion on your body, taking a shaver and
shaving the necessary areas. When you returned back to Gilbert, you saw
that the door was closed.

You knocked on the door but had gotten no answer... and you didn't hear any
loud music playing so what was wrong? You opened the door and stepped inside.
The lights were off and the curtains were all closed. As you looked for the light
swith you felt something forcefully grab your hands and tie them together with some
sort of constraint. You gasped, frightend and said quicky "Gilbert! You scared me..."

However you still got no response. That's when you started to get worried...

"Frau I'm sorry about this.. but I'm gonna make you feel so good after this..."

"W-Wait what!!? Gilbert! Let me go... Seriously."

Again there was no response.

Soon a cloth was put over your face and to tone down your yells, a ball like
object was strapped onto your mouth... Was that.... a gag!? Gilbert carried you
to the upstairs bedrooms where he had all his 'toys'...

You soon felt the softness of a bed but right away you started to tense up.
What was your boyfriend going to do to you!? You grew anxious but with this
ball gag, it was hard to speak. You could hear plastic being ripped nearby.
Gilbert removed the gag for a bit allowing you a few mintues to breathe
regularly till he slipped a liquid into your mouth through his own lips!

The stange tasting liquid was swallowed quickly. As Gil pulled away from you,
you coughed. The blindfold was keeping your from seeing anything. Gilbert
kissed your check and then slipped the gag back in your mouth.

"You're so cute Frau..."

He placed himself over you, taking off his shirt, leaving him shirtless. He lightly
stroked your body all over to see where you were most sensitive. Quickly you
responded; the neck, chest, and nether region.  

"Frau... prepair yourself for the best love of your life~!", he whispered

Soon you felt a pair of hands grope your chest, squeezing, rubbing, and repeating
again and again. In a matter of seconds, he unhooked your bra, and pinned your tied
hands to the headboard. Seeing your bare chest he wasted no time in giving them
pleasure. He used his fingers to pinch the buds then leaned his head in, licking
around the nippled then on it gently, teasing you.

You felt a sheer amount of sensation build up in your body. You felt your whole
body heat up as he caressed your breasts, letting out gasps and muffled moans
from you. Gilbert did the same to the other bud, this time sucking and lightly
biting on them. You squirmed and moved around to the sensation on his tongue on you.
You could feel your croatch grow warmer and wetter with each stroke.

Next he let go of your chest, pulling away from it as the cold air hit against it
making your nipple errect. Gilbert moved his fingers towards your croatch and slipped
a hand in your panties, massaging and pinching various places. You gasped and moaned
with every movement. Soon you felt a finger slip inside you, making you gasp. Then
another finger... Gil moved his fingers back and forth and stuck them in as far as
he could, making you coo in delight.

He removed the ball gag which was building up in your saliva and removed the
blindfold. You looked at his finger and how deep they were inside you. Gilbert
saw you lewd face and grined.

"Are you enjoying yourself, Frau? You're already wet..."

"G-Gil... ahh haa..." you could barely speak.

"Don't worry. I have more in store for you frau", he smirked.

He took out a vibrator and sticked them on your chest, and your nether regions
on a low setting. You, unable to take the teasing moved in discomfort.

"Gilbert... ahh m-more!"

"Vith pleasure leibe..."

The setting quickly went from low to high. You moans got louder and your gasps had
gotten heavier. When Gilbert saw how much you enjoyed the 'toys' he pulled them out
of you in a split second, sending pleasurable screams to your body.

You panted andtightly closed your legs. You felt so weird all over. It must have
been the drink he had made you swallow th made your feel to paralzied. However,
Prussia did not look satisfyied. He kissed your lip roughly, thrusting his tongue
in and out of your mouth,, exploring every possible place he could. Soon the two
of you need air and letting go, Gilbert took out his prize....

"Frau... Prepair yourself for my five meters!"

You wondered what he was talking about till you saw his member. For one thing, it
wasn't small... not small at all... and it wasn't actually 5 meters. But it was
beyond average that was for sure. It was perfect.

Speaking that you were still a virgin, you were pretty nervous. Before he could
begin, you used all of your strength to lift your hands to his face.

"Gilbert... T-This is my first time... Please be gentle...."

Gilbert looked at you with simpathetic eyes (ones he rarely gave). He gave you a
kiss to the lips and smiled.

"I promise... If you vant me to stop, let me know...", he whipered sweetly.
"I love you.. Ich leibe dich..."

With those words he pushed himself right into you. There was no lying past this
point. What just happend, hurt.... Blood was flowing out through your vital regions
as an imense amount of pain kicked into gear and bit you in the ass. However,
Gilbert stayed still and didn't move at all. He waited for your permission... another
thing he rarely did. Soon the amount of pain started to feel like something better...
Him inside you felt so weird yet so desireable.

"Ah... haaa Gilbert... You can move now...", you panted.

He nodded and began to move in and out of you in a moderate and easy rythem.
The look on his face right now was so sexy and handsome... You were happy
that you shared this with him.

"Ahh. ____________ You're s-so tight...", he panted as well...

Soon he picked up the climax as the two of you called out to each other in gasps
and moans. This only made Gil go faster. The sounds that your bodies were making
grew with every pleasurable feeling in your body.

"G-Gilbert...! AHHHA I'M GONNA --!"

"I-I am almost there too Ahha.."

"Nnnnagh... T-Together then..."


You held in everythign for as long as you could till finally Gil and you
came together. The feeling was of nothing you have never seen before. The
both of you laid side by side on the bed in each other's arms...

"I love you so much __________..."

"M-Me too Gilbert... I love you."


Narcissus: Prussia X Reader (LEMON) by pinkstar144

/ / ©2012-2016 pinkstar144
Mature Content
Sorry for the lack of grammar! I wrote this at 4:33 a.m....

Grrr Well I hope you enjoyed X3

Here's part 1: [link]
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Violet72 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2015
5 meters is 16 feet O.O
Fangirl1738 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2015
Bro I learned the metric and customary systems for fan Fics and when I memorized them al I learn a lot about hetalias dick sizes
LIVI1234 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I can images Germany hearing all of it and being like you go bro or WTF 0-0
SkellyBear666 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
Unwanted-immortals Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014
:3 :3 :3 :3 :3 :3 oo 
brightpaw8 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014
I-I-I er.... *blushing crazily and pulls hood over my face-
Carlli2000 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Student Artist
*breathing fast* Holy Mother! Holy mother! *nosebleeds and dies*
Zanni-Zanna Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014
...........only one thing can describe this....*nosebleed* g-great :D *faints*
MortalInstruments14 Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Student General Artist
LIFE WELL SPENT! *le dies of epic nosebleed*
mcbarnbarn15 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Hetalia Switzerland Nosebleed   i fucking love prussia so sexy hehe really good job lol
MizMikuHatsune Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*Germany walks in*
Germany: Gil-- !!! .... *walks out*
Chihiro-chan21 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Student General Artist
me: Gil, let's do this again.
Prussia: kesesesese sure!

Germany: grrr...damn you Prussia, damn you, damn- WOAH!
me: *blushed*
Prussia: *blushing in shame*
Germany: vould you cover up!! *disgusted*
me: *giggled*
Prussia: *laughed*
Germany: it's not funny!!
Kileythedestroyer Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
*dies laughing*
KittyKat1320 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Somebody please hand me a tissue....
IfYouSayYouLoveMe Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
LIFE WELL SPENT! *le dies of epic nosebleed*
fishesar Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Student Writer
haleyboplucy Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Feli is sleeping over at luddys house again. He hears strange noises.
Italy: Ahhh!!!Germany Germany!!!(Runs to Germany's room and jumps on the bed waking Luddy up.)
Germany:ahh!!, vats wrong Italy?(pissed from being woken up)
Italy: I think-a that there are-a wild animals in the house!!!(shivers)
Germany: (eyes widen) oh mein gott he didn't. He's touching my stuff again!!(you know what I mean by his stuff.;p) just go back to be Italy. It's just the animals I keep in the basement.
YukiSuoh01 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That make my day
Fangirl1738 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2015
Your icon made my day
nuba1lavifangirl123 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013
prussia: awesome
valeryEB Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Me: :iconfangasmplz: ooh~ goooood~!
Gil: :iconprussiagasmplz:
MizMikuHatsune Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
myralovesbanana02 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:icongermanywtfplz: : SHUT UP!!!!
hissshisshishishis just imagining Ludwig couldn't sleep
candyapple2028 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
AmberWorks Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
waah so cute!
pinkstar144 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you~!
AmberWorks Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you're welcome~
LostInTimecosplay Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Me too Gilbert... I love you...
Germany: good... You both love each other. now keep it down so I can sleep! >.<
(I always see that happening in stories like this... there's always someone else in the house and they don't get woken up by all the noise? /shot)
pinkstar144 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
LostInTimecosplay Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Awesome story :D thanks for writing it~ <3
pinkstar144 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome~
saylila Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:iconpervplz: i'm lovin' it
IfYouSayYouLoveMe Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ba da ba ba baaaaa XD
fishesar Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Student Writer
...can't help thinking of McDonald's
pinkstar144 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD Thank you~!
ClarencePhilip Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
*nosebleed everywhere* Oh my Gawd this is awesome~!!!!!!!
pinkstar144 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much >w<
AnohanaMenma Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013
Gil:then wear thes-
Me: HISS!!!*claws his face*
Me: I'm going to fucking kill you!
Ludwig:*opens the door and looks down and we freeze* vis point I have stoped asking questions...*closes door*

Haha another great one Pinkstar!
pinkstar144 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

D'awww thank you so much! You don't know how happy that makes me feel >///w///<

I would've clawed that Prussian too >_>
AnohanaMenma Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013
Yay!I return your glomping!.... o-o that came out weird. But who wouldn't claw him after that? No matter how awesome he is XD
OoSynchronicityoO Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I see no rape in this! >///w///< I find it pleasing all the way through! (I admit... I am a perv >w<)
xKawaiixBakax Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
Prussia tried to rape me at first... but, is it rape if it's willing?
(I can't believe I just said that... >/////////<)
pinkstar144 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XDD ( i feel where you're coming from >////w///< )
Dawn-of-Redliberty Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Omg did he attempt to rape me in the beginning?
Wouldn't have been rape anyway~


LOL the awsomeness is rubbing off on me xD
pinkstar144 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Dawn-of-Redliberty Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
jennelle20 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Student General Artist
I was a big pile of blood and sweet, sweet joy... ahaa ...there goes my nose again...
pinkstar144 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
lol want a tissue? :iconpervyprussiaplz:
jennelle20 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Student General Artist
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